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The Heart

The heart is not able to resist the pull
When the moment comes when emotions are full
Filled with a million memories and hurt
Especially the memory of a heartbreak's birth

A long, lucky person might endure
Only with a prayer true and pure
She took everything but there's nothing more to take
Except me living in a heartache

One word may say a billion lies
What if you fail after many tries?
Eventually the lies to say will try to grab a knife
Someday a lovers' mouth would end their life

The phone rings but there's no sound
This may result in a  fast fall to the ground
Eternity's the "parent" and loves' are "children" in a sense
It's 'basket of love' might catch us in suspense

Author notes

word bank contest: Heart, Million, Especially, Lucky, Long, Took, Billion, Knife, Lovers, Mouth, Phone, Fast, Parent, Children, Basket


For the everything and anything contest: this is a "hopeful", sad, dark, one-sided, love.
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Comments


  • dieu.
    June 17, 2009
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    sorry, but no.

    (plus, no rhyme allowed.)


  • gigglesalot
    February 26, 2009
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    this was an amazing poem. thank you so much for the write and good luck