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Birds of Love

Two met by happenstance
                floating down gracefully
                            feathers rippling in soft breeze
                                        knowing soon they too will disappear

                                                                            Kisses from one another
                                            finding only bliss in their amusement
            as the shimmering light makes its way
and they see-






                                                                            Only Love

Author notes

Do I really have to put Dreamscape in my authors notes? I mean really it's not very fair to me http://6elfwitch9.deviantart.com/art/Unexpected-Tragedy-85091835

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  • GoodbyeFarewell
    February 26, 2009

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    wow

    i love this i love the style you wrote this in great job amazing write keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    February 26, 2009

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    Absolutely beautiful!
    Really captured this picture very well
    through your words here. Great presentation
    and beautiful imagery here my friend.
    Good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826