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Lover's Serenade

A soft swish is heard
as fabric sways and breathes
like the ocean at high tide
she lifts her leg high


Him in between
fingers dance lightly
as shadows meld
in glowing moonlight


Waves bounce off the shore
heading in directions
never seen before
sweat glistens like pearls


Breathe in and out
quickly in this fevered dance
of two souls mingling
through their hearts desires

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  • GoodbyeFarewell
    February 26, 2009

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    wow

    i love the pictue for this i love the poem too great job keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day


  • Angelflower
    February 26, 2009

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    this was really wonderful... I love the way this flowed with the picture.. you did such a wonderful job.. Thank you very much for your entry, I truly enjoyed it..

    Angel


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    February 26, 2009
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    Oh yeah, here you go dear!


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    February 26, 2009

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    Awesome work hon! I love the presentation
    and the way that you wrote this one. Beautiful imagery too! Good luck to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826