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Slumber Sweetly

Cheeks blessed with mommies kisses
Sent to fullfill your dreams and wishes

Sweetly slumber baby o mine
Till the mornings sun does shine

Love and comfort brings you peace
Carefully bundled in the softest fleece

Cheeks blessed with mommies kisses
Sent to fullfill your dreams and wishes

Sweetly slumber baby o mine
Till the mornings sun does shine

Sparkling love lies within your eyes
As mommy sings her precious baby
Lull a bys



 

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Title isn't great, I know.
Muse ran out, sorry but congrats to you and your family!

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  • graybeard
    March 5
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    Great Lullaby

    Never got that when I was little. Usually drifted off to the sound of yelling and things breaking.

    • You and I both, but I can't be bitter about it since it only served to ensure that my children would have a different kind of childhood.
      Thank you for your comment friend

  • i loved reading this poem! reminds me of my mom!


  • thepoetssoul
    March 3

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    Wonderfully written, lovely words sung from the heart
    A beautiful piece of poetry indeed.
    Be blessed in all you do.

    Tony

    • Thank you! Sorry I didn't respond sooner, something wrong with the internet and I am not getting messages or notes so I am playing catch up now LOL.


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 26

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    THIS IS VERY SWEET!!!!

    Oh my! This just flows ever so softly as one reads it! So relaxing and peaceful!!! 's

    • karma-n-peace
      February 26
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      Thanks sweetie! Been a long time since mine were babies and I had to think of lullabyes to whooo them to sleep.
      A little dusty but workable LOL!

  • Nice use of repatition and rhyme. I like the flow.

  • SoulWhispher
    February 26

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    You are wrong, this is great, I am sure they will love it, you muse is still running strong, love John

    • karma-n-peace
      February 26
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      Thank you John! I haven't done the lullabye thing many years LOL! Brought back some pretty cool memories though!
      Love,
      Nicole

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