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Spellbound

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Spellbound

 

Crimson feather blooming blush

florid flaming fluent lush

drenched in anticipation

passion plays a royal flush.

 

          Nourished rose seep rendezvous

          oozing whispers sketch soft hues

                    seeded in satisfaction

            where sweet reverie wings woo.

 

Nestled beside ruby songs

fire blood-flow rushes strong

enticed intoxication

though falling for lust is wrong.

 

          So let love abide in kiss

     and feverish tongue taste bliss

            in sensuous sensation

           petals grace every wish.

 

Spellbound within auburn sighs.

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Pic Prompt #2 by http://indospan.deviantart.com/

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    March 13

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    As always....you have us spellbound as your title..the rhyme, flow, imagery all mesmerizing us into such a blissful write


  • poetryrocksmysox
    February 27
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    Such a poetic piece that spellbinds me, you are a weaver of words in the most winsom way. Thanks for sharing your love here always, and the gift that resides with your tender heart!


  • Wandika gold member
    February 26
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    Very nice Timothy

    Nice to see you trying different styles. This was well done my friend.

    Jim


  • Angelflower
    February 26

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    This was really beautiful.. Soft and yet sweetly sensual... It was like a slow build really, a small fire that slowly built into an inferno.. You really did a wonderful job with this picture.. Thank you very much for your entry, best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    February 26

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    ~Perfection in Autumn Colours~

    ~Dearest Timothy~ Beautiful~
    Lush Beauty and passion in ruby red
    Your song of love weaves fervor threads,
    I love the magic and creative rhyme
    Spellbound in your enchanting time!
    ~All My Love, Sharon~


  • liltulip gold member
    February 26

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    lovely pic

    and beautifully descriptive words you have written to accompany it! good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing!


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 26
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    Magnificent write as always. Thanks for the share.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 26

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    Spellbound within auburn sighs

    that leaves so much in my mind. thank you for sharing this most wonderful write with me today. i wish you well in this contest that you have entered and am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie


  • DesolatELifE
    February 26

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    I like the structure of this.
    Very nice. Very good poem indeed! I Really like 'passion plays a royal flush.'! Very good line.

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