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Fatal Attraction.(Hay(na)ku)

Lorelei
Serenaded sailors
Watching them die

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 26
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    wow ~ so different. So meaningful... x


  • Sir Pelleas
    February 26

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    Serious piece of penmanship with this one, so few words but the imagery created brings a bigger picture to life.
    Well done.