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You set me free
With heaven in your eyes.
Youre hand on mine
You let my soul fly.

I need to know
you will never betray
or leave me here
that you will stay....

You set me free
with heaven in your eyes
Set me free...

I burn with my desire
to be at your side
my heart bursting with love
I cant stop, no matter how hard i try

You set me free
with heaven in your eyes
set me free....

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  • Heroesrox
    March 18

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    OMG! I love that line "you set me free with heaven in your eyes". That is so friggin lovely! I had to read that line outloud to me fiancee because I was entranced by it! Great job!


  • Jazzlyn
    March 11
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    awww.... i love it its so cute


  • jackreed3 gold member
    February 26
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    very nice poem.. sounds like love... JackReed3.. nice style and flow..


  • Sarin Rayne
    February 26
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    I thought of the love that I share with Jordan.Wonderfully done hun.Absoultly beautiful


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    February 26
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    I really like this..love the repetition, adds to the feel. good job


  • Ravyn Stormcrow
    February 26
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    beautiful...I am speechless!

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