I'm not ready to let go
or manage the emotions
that are spilling me.
I am not yours.
never was.
You hold me crushing
what hasn't happened yet; my future
shaped into empty space.
You were not mine.
never to be.
But your voice called;
beckoned I stay even
as I was leaving;
I'd cry but
that part is broken.
I've been taken away
in a dream not so sureal,
screaming, " I don't even care".
They think I'm lying
until I start laughing.
(c) Debby Sorensen Carlson
2/25/2009
Author notes
I have no idea where or why this came from. All I know is that it hurt to write it.
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This is so sad and heartbreaking. A voice from the heart. God bless
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Gosh so full of pain! Damn! Great write! Love the way you've worded this write
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Debby, good job
I get an all over sick lost feeling. I hear the crys but it is not you someone you know and someone I know is "lost in agony." maybe a sub-title?
As Christians we do so want the lost be saved from "everlasting torment".
I would say keep up the good work, except c I don't wont you to suffer like that.
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Brother Bob
My dear brother in Christ, My pain is past but there is a reason I wrote this. I could not stop myself from writing this so there is someone out there that needs to see this. I think they need to know they are not alone and when that person comments.. I and Christ will be here,
I did not mean to cause you pain reading this but it does tell me what a compassionate heart you have. Much love, In Christ.. Debby
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wow! this is good!
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hisaddiction
Thank you. I made a few changes. What do you think ? Blessings. d
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