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Let Me Wither

Like a moth

pressed to windowpanes

covered with candle flames-

 

I just want to mingle

with the burning wick.

                 Extinguished.











































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  • EverxEnding silver member
    March 14, 2009

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    Fantastic! Gold! Woot!! Congrats on that.

    I can taste self destruction in this one.
    brilliantly written.


  • Lavender Butterfly
    February 26, 2009
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    Fabulous... !xxx


  • luna-midnight silver member
    February 26, 2009

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    wow, you are so brillant at short writes. i think youll do very well in the contest, and i love the ending! superb. good luck
    Stephanie ♥


  • XvampireX
    February 26, 2009
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    Good

    It says so much in just a short amount that you wrote.