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A friend's pain

She deserves it all,
Gracefull creature with a golden heart.
He made her fall,
Now her world is torn apart.

She cries tonight.
Terrors haunt her in her dreams,
And in her light.
But she is stronger than she seems.

She won't drown.
Though I'd like so much to make it right,
And bring him down.
But it's her, not my, battle to fight.

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