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Bump in the Night

I see you sleeping
Heart beating

Tears streaming
Nightmares in your head

Do you hear me creeping?
At your window I sit

Your blood is calling
Like a syrain to your death

I try to ignore it
The pulls to strong I drain you

My pretty my heart my love

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  • awannabepoet
    May 23

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    This is most excellent blood sucking life draining nightmare enducing poetry.

    I loove the imagery and the flow of this poem, and enjoyed reading it.

    Thanks for sharing.


  • darkyinsoul
    April 24

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    Excellent..
    I loved the imagery.
    Thanks for the share
    Darky


  • Titus gold member
    April 19
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    I was hoping apathticpoison was going to grade this out of 10. but well done


  • Night Terrors
    April 19

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    lol hi sgsin were the heck you been hun???? I loved this one then and I love this one now I am going to add it to the finalist list

  • Night Terrors
    February 25
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    Hi girlly I love this I realy do great to see you

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