One of these upcoming days you will understand
What comes around goes around; you'll see
You'll give her your heart and she will cause you pain
You'll feel what you have done to me
You forget that I was the one always there
"I'm sick for ever believing in you"
When I start to have faith that you see this is real
Just what do you go along and do?
A shadow of the person that you once seemed
A fraction of the girl that I thought to be
What was so wrong and odd with us?
Why did things go to such a far degree?
"One of these days, when your dreams come true
That's the one that's gonna do it to you"
Author notes
OPTION 1
write a poem inspired by this song that i love!
WISH I DIDN'T MISS YOU by Angie Stone
A contest entry
- Wish I Didn't Miss You Anymore by GypsyEyes.
900 points, ended March 30, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
All advice/comments loved always.
Comments
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OooOO, awesome! I really like this, keep it up

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WOW this was really good actually...hmm...i liked all the quotes from the song that you sited and the fact that i didnt feel like it was a rhyme was amazing! you really captured what i am going through...thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox




