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That's The One [Contest]

One of these upcoming days you will understand
What comes around goes around; you'll see
You'll give her your heart and she will cause you pain
You'll feel what you have done to me

You forget that I was the one always there
"I'm sick for ever believing in you"
When I start to have faith that you see this is real
Just what do you go along and do?

A shadow of the person that you once seemed
A fraction of the girl that I thought to be
What was so wrong and odd with us?
Why did things go to such a far degree?

"One of these days, when your dreams come true
That's the one that's gonna do it to you"

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write a poem inspired by this song that i love!
WISH I DIDN'T MISS YOU by Angie Stone

A contest entry

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  • Oh.My.Juliet
    April 2
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    OooOO, awesome! I really like this, keep it up


  • GypsyEyes
    March 2
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    WOW this was really good actually...hmm...i liked all the quotes from the song that you sited and the fact that i didnt feel like it was a rhyme was amazing! you really captured what i am going through...thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox