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Full Circle



Reality makes way

through flesh

 

deadly intentions

seduce judgement 

preying on cracks

 

in due time

weakness is stripped

to the core

 

if not corrected

purity is met

by demise... 

 

 

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30 words or less
Prompt: dying to self

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  • going nowhere
    February 26

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    like this interpretation of the prompt. and the title just pulls it all together. well done. thank you for your entry.