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Just For Keelan And Eli

Keelan and Eli
what the pair

Keelan and Eli
are seen everywhere

They move as one
Keelan taking lead

Keelan and Eli
down by the lake

Keelan teaches
Eli swimming strokes

Keelan moves on
Eli moves in shadow

Bikes are next
to the trails they go

Keelan and Eli
what the pair

Keelan and Eli
are seen everywhere

Keelan skips stones
Eli tries to mimic

Keelan learns first
Eli follows the foot prints left

Keelan takes lead in all
Eli tries not to fall

Keelan and Eli
will forever be the great pair

Keelan and Eli
will be seen everywhere

to the end
they will they will stay

changing lead role
and shadow chaser

but to the end
they will remain inseperatable

enjoy your role Sir Keelan
as Eli enters your page.











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  • Jesann gold member
    March 3

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    Ha ha....that's very sweet.
    Great imagery, you can just picture a little brother tagging along following in the footsteps of the older one.
    Thank you.