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Tonight-

I see you more
beautiful

absent,
is the august moon
in crisp air,
scents of wildflowers
                      flowing through
                              your hair

          and you-
                  in a black satin dress,
with a thousand eyes
                  *wink to me

this night,
        when I close my eyes

I will dream myself
                                          …to you

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  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    February 26

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    Beautiful!

    I had to reread it to come up with an appropriate comment. This is so serene and sensuous at once. I love it. You have penned a beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing with me. Best of luck in this contest.


    • Malabu
      February 26
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      thank you... i wrote this poem to your back ground ...being i could not find a picture here or on your main page

  • Aisades
    February 25
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    This is beautiful writing. I love the romance in your heart Mally.


  • poet2angels gold member
    February 25
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    Gorgeous, romantic...
    So... "you"
    sigh~

    Lynda


  • Naughtygrlred
    February 25
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    awwwwwwwwwwww

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