Muddled words in this dark world cannot express
what to life really means, what it causes, what it comes with
The sun is always setting, never rising, always bleeding
My eyes.........
no longer see any light
Daddy's hands have hurt me
That mans hands have hurt me
That things hands have hurt me
That savage animals claws have destroyed me
I
A contest entry
- Wake up to ALL Abuse - Prewrites Welcome by Shari-Lei.
700 points, ended March 3, 2009, 61 entries
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Judged
The comparison between your father being a person, and than an animal is very powerful. It creates a disturbing image.
Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
Shari
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