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How I Love Thee...

I love your eyes
How the brown dances when touched by the sun....
How they gaze over my body with such sensitivity.

I love your nose
Perfectly set on your face;
The way it breathes in at the curve of my neck.

I love your lips
Full, soft and sweet
How they bring out the moans from deep within..

Oh, how I love your heart
Big, giving and loving;
Especially the simple fact that it's all mine......

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  • ApollosMuse
    March 15

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    very beautiful...I actually liked the second stanza the best...the way it breathes in at the curve of my neck...this is so endearing...great great piece!!


  • the ripple
    March 14

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    Enjoyed reading this, love the last stanza especially. love the flow from eyes to nose to lips to heart. As always enjoyed reading it


  • sense surreal gold member
    March 13
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    I love how you describe him and the feeling that it gives you, wonderful

    this is beautiful