I wonder if while you're holding her at night
You ever think about me
The way we used to hold each other
What we could have been together
Have you ever pictured my face when you kissed her
Thought about the feel of my lips
The heat created between us
Wanted to run back into my arms
When she tells you she loves you does it feel the same
Does your heart jump like it used to
Do you melt when she says it
Are you able to know she means it
Have you ever thought that maybe I've loved you more than her
Could you picture it if you tried
Would you believe me if I told you
Endless dreams about you aren't something new
Can't you see that I could be so much better than her for you
Everyday I regret my choice
I've cried more times than you'll ever know
I wish that I'd never let you go
My jealousy grows every time I hear someone mention her
Misplaced jealousy, of course
To see you with her breaks my heart
Longing for you everyday we were apart
A foolish dream to think you could ever still love me
I hurt you more than I've ever been
Alone with all these unwanted thoughts
Of course your love for me you've forgotten
I can't ask you to ever love me and leave her love behind
You're no longer mine to have
It will be a sad day until I realize
I'll never again be the light in your eyes
25 February 2009
Samantha Harris
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Filled with so much rich emotion--longing and hope, regret....many heartfelt feelings at work here....you have presented them wonderfully. Excellent write!!
wyatt
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Thank you so much!!
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*Ouchness*
Hrmmm, i know this feeling all to well *sighs*
you've penned your emotions really well in this
Well done!!! All the best to you in the contest
Ken
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Thank you. Tough feeling ain't it.
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OMG...THATS FILLED WITH SOOO MUCH LONGING...
BUT LOVE IS ALL ABOUT HOPES...EVEN LOST LOVE...
DON'T KNOW HOW WELL U UNDERSTAND MY STATEMENT...???
GOD BLESS YA -
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I get you. Thank you for the comment!!
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wow, i feel like this right now. you did an an awesome job, as always. Keep up the good writing!
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Thank you! Hopefully you'll get more out of this feeling than I ever will.
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wow. this sounds like the poem i have tried to write so many times to my husband... its heartbreaking. thank you so much for entering and good luck.
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Thank you. Yes, this has been something that's been haunting me for 2 years but have only now fully accepted it.
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Amazing
First off this write was simply gorgeous; I completely know how you feel. Beautiful
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Thank you. It's hard to feel this isn't it.
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