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Mary

Mary

gracefull with glee

how I  love thee

mother of jesus

please be with us

in our time of need

Author notes

for my mom thank you joeseph for her heart R.I.P

A contest entry

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  • ourgirlFriday
    March 23
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    lovely and simple


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    March 22

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    I like this very very much. It is so beutifully simple, a good reflection of the truth, a little prayer, there for everyone, and not kept in reserve, I really really love this
    good luck to you in the contest


  • Violinstrings silver member
    March 21

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    short but sweet it sounds like you say the rosary
    it reminds me of the feeling you get when you say the rosary and go to church


    • Aajdj
      March 30
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      the rosary

      in the rosary mostly its the hail mary

      hail mary
      full of grace
      the lord is with thee
      blessed art though among women
      and blessed is the fruit of your womb jesus
      play with us sinners
      now and at the time of our deat

      oops i meant pray


  • raspberry Greeters member
    February 27

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    Very very beautiful!!

    Short yet soo much meaning this beautiful poem. Thank you for the entry.. am glad u thought of Mother Mary when yo usaw this picture.. I had that thought just a while back and wondered why dint anyone count up to that?? And here you go..

    thank you..

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