Help me understand the meaning of love.
There are those who speak to me rather strangely.
They talk it as if we just established friendship.
There others make me feel I have sleep with them
And, there are a few who want me throttle the information out of them.
They might tell me bits of their accomplishments
But, they give no insurance that they really loved it.
I have witness more hate in my life
But, it was not all directed to me on this hate path.
I could speak more of this hate
But, I do not want you love me more by its effect.
I, also, do not want fuel this fire of hate.
What comes next after a friendship has been established?
I know some friends I had made feel as if I am walking down a dead street
But, I do not what your help if that is all your attention is.
I want those will share me what they find as awesome than just me find it
Or at least give me a lead to find someone who will.
It is this inscrutable path of love that I would like to take.
A contest entry
- Share the Love by fatality-rhymed77.
700 points, ended March 9, 2009, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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I have felt like this many times and it's nice to see someone write something so relateable. Thank you for your entry, I enjoyed it very much!
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Finding Mr. right is not easy. It took a life time dream to finally come true. Look for some one honest and you can talk out problems. some one that will do anything for you because he loves you. Thats true love.
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