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stay away

stay away from my soul
stay away you beautiful fiend
but you cant stay away
for in my blood your course runs deep
staying in me forever more

numb to all sensations but yours
numb to my own self pity
I'm indestructable aren't I?
it's not my folly to join hands with the devil
well...maybe just this once

stay in me for without you I soon die
but is this life by your side worth it all?
break me down to the essence of you
that's all you left when you should have stayed

I'll forever love you my demon
your name haunts me eternally
as your gifts keep my heart slowly beating

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  • hisaddiction
    February 25
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    OOPS lol i was so stoked I forgot to applaud!


  • hisaddiction
    February 25
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    Are you serious? This poem is ridiculous! So brilliant...I love it!


    • exithere
      March 10
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      thnx. i didnt think it was that good it kinda just came out