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Anywhere With You

Waited all of my life for someone like you,
may I fly away with you to where love grows.
Let the sad times disappear in the sunset?

Do not let time steal away precious moments,
let our journey never end nor love fade away.
May my wish upon the falling star be granted.

When the moon rises, will I be in your arms,
will you love me like you have never before?
Let me feel all I imagined loving you would be.




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  • Capt Jed silver member
    March 1

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    Oh, the dreams we do have of our perfect lover. This is simply beautiful, and it would seem that the dream has come true in that last line. It brought tears to my eyes as I absorbed the idea of the poem and the remote possibility of a relationship like it describes. I guess it caught me in just the right mood, but I thought it was very touching and warmed the heart.
    Bless you and Gentle caresses,
    Ron


    • Sandygram
      March 2
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      Good Morning Ron

      Always nice to hear from my friend. Hope the weather is better down there then here. Where is Spring?? Thank you for the lovely comment. You take care. Bless You, Sandy


  • LittleMoon silver member
    February 26

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    Sandy you have written such a gem with this prompt. I read it through and then read it again and keep thinking - if only. Sheila


    • Sandygram
      February 28
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      Good Morning Shelia

      Thank you for the lovely coment. Always a delight to hear from you. Thank you. Hugs and Smiles. Sandy

  • SoulWhispher
    February 25

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    You have indeed captured the contest prompt, makes the reader say ...take me away..., your poetry is so wonderfull, blessings with love John

    • Sandygram
      February 28
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      Good Morning John

      Always brightens my day when I see you have read my poetry. Hugs and Smiles dear friend. Blessings to you.

      Love, Sandy


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 25

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    Awe... Such a romantic poem!!
    Very beautiful. Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    February 25

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    Good work

    , Great poem good message, love the imagery and the thoughts behind it. You done a great job with this and with a clear message vision of love. (QQ) There were no errors. No typos and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one. But if you don’t return the favor I will never Review you again .


    • Sandygram
      February 26
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      Great Comment

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate both. You take care. Sandy


  • Midnite-Rae
    February 25

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    Aww this is so romantic. I loved it. It reminded me of Josh and put a smile on my face. You did a wonderful job. Keep up the amazing work mom.


    • Sandygram
      February 26
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      Lovely Poem

      Thank you for the lovely comment. Always nice to hear from you. Hugs and Smiles. Take care.

      Love, Mom

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