Dimensional vibrations merge
in a cathedral of light
Casting infinity to
the depths of mental
saturation
mind over mass,
eye to eye engagement
of thought
purified by times
eternal clock
to wit the matrimony
of enlightenment and truth
embodied in the Iris
of existential cognizance
A contest entry
- Three Sides Of The Pyramid...Focus The Elements by Blue Rew.
2800 points, ended March 9, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Abstract and engaging with its high-end vocabulary...I take the three elements here as:
the mental, spiritual and physical planes of being.
Strong use of couplets, the beginning being my
favorite. Blue
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This is a strong piece rendering intense thoughts. The idea that the mind cannot grasp what is dimensional truths is presented well in this piece.
I like the idea that dimensional vibrations cause one to see the bonding of enlightenment and truth.
"purified by times
eternal clock "
times should be time's - a tiny typo easily remedied.
An interesting and intense piece. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela
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What an exciting ride of imagery.
KW~
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PRETTY PRETTY!!! Good Luck!
You penned this well!
I like ....Embodied in the Iris of Existential cognizance.
Blessings!
Steffany
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wow
again, reading you is a pleasure, this definately shines, it embraces the reading, guiding them in to its light...thank you for sharing!
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I love the title. It just draws you into to WANT to read this piece. This piece has an AURA of light around it, almost. I just get the image of Hercules meeting his father Zeus for the first time and being awed to be in the presence of a god. I love the wording and the flow this piece had. Amazing, amazing write. - cgirl0410
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