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Proof Of Tomorrow

Time to look ahead my friend,
leave the past behind.
If you want to find happiness,
know you still have time.

Each new tomorrow,
you so take the lead.
so tell me why are you,
still in the past indeed.

Each new waking day,
wake with a smile and find the way.
To ceate within this brand new day,
go a different direction and find a way .

Do nothing of the ordinary,
find happiness and joy abound. 
Ignore the past and reach my friend,
to the new you right now.

So often we sit and ponder ,
over the bad things in our stride.
Instead of getting up and getting out,
and making a new life. 

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#2 Proof of tomorrow

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  • mooniemc
    February 28
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    I so needed to read this today - thank you!
    Good luck!
    Hugs, Moon

  • goalsv
    February 26

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    A beautiful and up beat poem. With solid advice for making a positive life. Telling us to focus on the positive and not the negetive. Will change our whole outlook.


  • karma-n-peace
    February 25

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    Yes there is wisdom and truth and in your words.
    You have written a very supportive piece and done so with a flowing style, I love this type of rhyme.
    Thank you for entering


  • Midnite-Rae
    February 25
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    This poem is so full of hope. You did an amazing job. I loved the poem. Keep up the amazing work.


  • Violinstrings silver member
    February 25

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    good advice,;
    so often we sit and ponder/ instead of getting up and getting out and making a new life.
    it is so true and well written I like that each stanza seems like a different message but they all blend


  • maralisa silver member
    February 25
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    a wonderfull poem my friend fantastic for the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Sadpuppet
    February 25
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    wow, this is just great! i love the words you put in it, well done
    love you gran


  • StarEyes
    February 25

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    Excellent take on the prompt! But you know, sometimes that is easier said than done

    This is great! I love your words of wisdom here!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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