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Don't let it be

The shocking climax
Towering ahead
Younger than at first glance

It grips harder
Try to hide behind
This unresponsive corpse

With a shudder
    It ends?
To reveal deeper

Too small at first glance
But there's a way
Eyes hold this vision

No release.
    It ends?
Never.

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  • Reanna Eryn
    March 21, 2009
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    Beautiful.! Sad, but lovely.


  • Midnite-Rae
    February 25, 2009
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    This sounds so sad. but I liked it. Keep up the great work.