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when its love

Looking to the night sky
I memorize all the stars
Big dipper to Aryans belt

The warm breeze
whipping past
Bringing spring in

Laying down this blanket
I place candles
three in one corner two in the other

Looking across this field
I see your smile
moving in closer and close

So excited
running to your arms
almost knocking you over
Kissing your tender lips
I gasp, taking in more air
I dont want to break this embrace

Watching the moon
dance across your skin
I laugh to myself
Not even a beautiful night
could compare to the beauty i call mine

My love
my beautiful girl

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  • jolly rancher
    February 25, 2009
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    oh yeah

    you are pretty good. i give it a definite thumbs up!lol