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Ablutophobia

When young,
he swore he wouldn't bath
scared the water would strip
the knowledge he accumulated

Layers of lessons stayed
marked by layers of dirt
each particle
a particle of life

A contest entry

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  • February Moon gold member
    February 25
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    Nicely done, thanks for entering.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 25
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    wow, this was unique, i like the concept of it! good luck and take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • Callisto Athena gold member
    February 25
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    What a great take on the prompt, Hon.. I love it's uniqueness.. Well done..