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Drafting

why can't you see...

no.

but,
why do i see
what you...

no.


blindfolded.

my eyes open
and all you see is
me

yet i see
nothing.

no.

everything?

blindfolded.




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Picture prompt: Image by mumbojumbo89 at deviantart.com.

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  • February Moon gold member
    February 25

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    I agree with Steph, this is really different, but I enjoyed it. Thank you for entering.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 25

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    oohhh, this is very different, and i like it, hehe, it makes you stop and think at diff points, and lets you use your imagination. great job! good luck and take care
    Stephanie ♥