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A Zebra's Heart

A jewel-stripe glimmers
and is taken in the moonlight
as feet stomp to a beat.

New paths bled to wailing cries
are the music.

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A contest entry

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  • Your words are so wonderful, you have an amazing gift...smiles

    Many blessings
    ~A~

  • ea silver member
    March 5

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    This is a mysterious message coming from a nutshell... I wonder what is afoot in the forest tonight! Thank you for your entry.


  • maa gold member
    March 1

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    I can tell you're your mummy's daughter !
    the same gift, the same grace, the same spark of soulfulness ... you are such a treasure ...


    maa


  • Blue Rew silver member
    February 25

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    The imagery here brings so much alive
    that is left unsaid. Perfect handful of
    feeling for a nutshell. Blue