A jewel-stripe glimmers
and is taken in the moonlight
as feet stomp to a beat.
New paths bled to wailing cries
are the music.
In a list
A contest entry
- Message in a Nutshell (for children ages 12 and under) by ea.
700 points, ended March 5, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Your words are so wonderful, you have an amazing gift...smiles
Many blessings
~A~

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This is a mysterious message coming from a nutshell... I wonder what is afoot in the forest tonight! Thank you for your entry.


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I can tell you're your mummy's daughter !
the same gift, the same grace, the same spark of soulfulness ... you are such a treasure ...

maa

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The imagery here brings so much alive
that is left unsaid. Perfect handful of
feeling for a nutshell. Blue





