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Courage

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With courage far beyond his size,

His actions, oft, are not too wise.

He’s n’er afraid to start a fight

Despite the fact he’d be one bite.

He says, "If I just bark real gruff,

Those giant dogs might think I’m tough.

And if I’m really just outclassed,

They’ll find that I can run real fast.

But now you’d better show some fear,

Cause there’s no place for you ‘round here.

Just take that silly light blond hair

Away from here, to anywhere!"

Author notes

Have two dogs myself. Big ones though.

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  • mitchybaby
    March 16

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    That is my kind of poetry dad!! Love it, anything to with animals I love lol. Great write!! You are so amazing, blow my mind everytime I read a write by you! Love you dad


  • nilav
    March 16

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    enjoyed it though i don't like dogs much(some people say it is my weakness..hihihi hahaha)
    the flow and rhyme are appreciable...and congrats on the trophy


  • lizeluv
    March 10

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    Hahah! So freakin' adorable and humorous! I loved this Paul

    Great job!!!


  • queenie gold member
    March 7

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    the humor in this compliments the flow and makes a tried and true rhyming pattern seem new and innovative.it's easy to see why this won because it has all of the ingredients of a winner.be blessed and keep that talent heated up.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    March 4

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    This is great!! LOL, it is all about the attitude! Go little dude. Great take on the picture. Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Mrs.Snowflake
    March 4
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    That is great, I thought it was really cute!


  • suseann
    February 26

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    Very cute take you've penned. Looks like the lill guy is being held toward the spanial against his will. In which cause it's a defensive tactic. And the bigger dog is saying,"are you talikin to me?" He has that taxi driver Deniro look about him.


  • Legend silver member
    February 26

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    An excellent little poem That uses the prompt so well Perfect rhyme and flow An enjoyable read Good luck in the contest


  • Ishtar
    February 25

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    teehee, that's such a cute picture and your poem fits it perfectly.

    If we got my Kero and Roo with your Jake and Zoey, the pictures would look very similar, 'cept I'm pretty sure Kero is a coward.


    Guess what I am?
    jealous, omghaspshock!Noway.

    One of these days. . .
    -GD Reni


  • Veronica Leigh
    February 25

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    CUTE!!!!!! This reminds me of Little Joe! The picture is very cute and you wrote this really well, as always. You can write about a paper bag. You suck.

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