The Sun yawned
Rays of Light sleepily stretch across the sky
Shooing away the darkness and gloom
Birds sweetly sing their morning’s joy.
The world begins to stir from its peaceful slumber
Yet another day is beginning.
Please, be honest and tell me what you think?
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This is such a pretty, nice, sweet little poem.
It's amazing how much we take forgranted, such as morning in this society.
It is a very good write and so contented!
You have just the right amount of imagery, keeping me hooked until the last line.
I'm bookmarking this so i can read it again, when i am in a morning mood
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Thank you for your kind response I actually found a bunch of my old poems from when I was 12, this was one of them : ) Thanks for your positive feed back i'm glad you liked it.
Ellen.
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