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The End

Demented images left
a kaleidoscope of colors


some watched in awe
while others feared


in time everyone was bored


the colors faded
along with sanity

 

people walked around -

not caring

 


 

Author notes

Image by mumbojumbo89 at deviantart.com

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  • maralisa silver member
    February 25
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    aw wow what a very deep and powerful take on the image promt good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 25

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    this is great, very powerful, i really like the ending, when someone says not caring, it always is a kick. good luck and take care
    Stephanie ♥

  • venus21
    February 25
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    I like this pice and the picture.


  • Callisto Athena gold member
    February 25

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    You do speak truth in these words.. Wonderful take on the human condition, Hon..


  • February Moon gold member
    February 25
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    Nicely written, I always enjoy your work.


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 25
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    Nice take on this picture prompt dear poet.
    I wish you the best in the contest.

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