Look At Me,
Look At You,
Make My Day,
I Hope You,
Think Of Me,
When I'm Away,
Lightning Strikes At My Soul,
I Breath In, Deep Breaths Of Hope,
And Wake Up, From My Quiet Dream,
To See You, So Perfectly,
And It's All,And It's All For You,And It's All,And It's All For You,
My Day Shines,
Thoughts Of You,
Brightly Glow,
Take Me Out,
Drunk On You,
Take Me Home,
Lightning Strikes At My Soul,
I Breath In, Deep Breaths Of Hope,
And Wake Up, From My Quiet Dream,
To See You, So Perfectly,
And It's All,And It's All For You,And It's All,And It's All For You,
Run Away,Run Away,Run With Me,
Take My Hand And We'll Make It Through,
I Face My Fears, Just To See You,
Lightning Strikes At My Soul,
I Breath In, Deep Breaths Of Hope,
And Wake Up, From My Quiet Dream,
To See You, So Perfectly,
And It's All,And It's All For You,And It's All,And It's All For You,
Author notes
googaly bear and shnookie wookums
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- The Love of Your Life by JustFallingApart.
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aww very sweet
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sorry i accidently pressed the send key. Anyways. I thought this was a sweet poem. It kinda makes me think of my boyfriend. Keep up the great work
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It was good, but I think it would flow a little better if there were some breaks in it. Good job. Keep on writing
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AWWW THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!
googaly bear I know it's you! Thank you so much baby this is the best gift ever
don't worry I promise I won't be biased. I love you, thank you again, for my song. This is the most special thing I could have recieved because it came from your heart. Happy Anniversery (tommorow that is) 
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a great write,
i was held on a string throughout.
You have some very powerful imagery and a lot feelings showing right through this.
I feel you over-capitalized a bit, and to me; it doesn't make sense.
But poetry often doesn't make sense
I love the last line,
lots.
Thanks for sharing.
- lexi
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