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I Can't Wait!

Missing image
Touching mother’s belly, I feel you move.
Excitement glows with each touch that I hold,
fascination in life is reborn here
and love is the beginning emotion.

It seems your name brings quite a stir for them.
Mom and dad don’t agree a single bit.
Yet, I know who you are and who you’ll be…
my grandson, great and mighty is that name.

I recall when daddy was born to me,
eight pounds, one ounce and even fighting mad.
His hair, I imagine you will obtain.
(I think that is why mommy has heartburn.)

No matter whom you look like or do not,
my heart is swelling with pride as I wait.
Mommy glows with each passing day’s coming.
Daddy, well he doesn’t know what to say.

I can’t wait to meet you in the spring time!
Flowers will bloom and the sun will then shine.
The rains will cease the moment you are born
and I… I will finally see your face.


I love you,

Grandma

Author notes

my grandson is due May 17, 2009. i can hardly wait.

thank you for reading me


ps--no, this picture is not him but as soon as i can scan one in, i will.

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  • piccola silver member
    March 2

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    what a peaceful time to be born. Still cool, birds twittering, flowers beginning to bloom. My great grandchild will be born in late Sept. The end of summer for us. The heat is miserable and I picture Alyssa starting her labor in the swimming pool


  • storiesuntold gold member
    February 27

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    Oh how blessed you all are indeed

    This is one thing in my life I shall never be able to experience but through your loving words it embraces me so .Congradulations to the family and raise te child as God would indeed . Love Patty


  • Hetha gold member
    February 25

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    This is absolutely precious. Rich with imagery and beautiful sentiments are sweet and lovely throughout.
    Awesome write, and congratulations on your forthcoming grandson.