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~My Angel Rhianna~

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A sweetest soul, I have come to know

Nothing is better then her prayers and poems

Godly Girl so full of laughter and praise

Ever trusting and listens to what God has to say

Loving sister forever a blessing Thank you Lord

        for sending me this sweet Angel

 

 

 Happy Birthday My Sweet Sister Rhianna

 

 

 

With all my love

 Rend 

 

 

Please come by and wish Rhianna/X Angel X on her birthday march 2, 2009 http://allpoetry.com/x.Angel.x

 

 

an Angel came my way a blessing lifted my spirits with her treasured words and wrote me a poem about Gods love I will always be grateful. 

 

 

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I appreciate any help, and if you do help please I. M.  me so i can make the changes privately, R  

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    August 10, 2009
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    this is stunning and a sweet gift to your sister .. I know she will love the words you have penned ..Hugs always Angel♥


  • J Macabre
    August 10, 2009

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    This was a sweet and beautiful dedication and acrostic to your sister. A truly wonderful gift from you to her. I'm sure she holds it dear.


  • awannabepoet
    June 16, 2009
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    A perfect birthday wish for a sweet little angel.


  • penman gold member
    May 15, 2009
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    Wonderful

    Such a creative write. and a great birthday expression. Congrats on the honorable mention


  • TwiztidMaggot
    May 5, 2009

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    this is a really good piece! What a wonderful job you did. You should have gotten gold! Congrats on the honorable mention though. Keep up your amazing work!

    CrimsonViper


  • Swan song gold member
    April 2, 2009
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    a beautiful birthday poem from a lovely lovely and talented poetess


  • quack silver member
    March 6, 2009
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    i really like it i love you sis hugggggggggggs you tight


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 5, 2009
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    Aww.. and a sweet angel she is!!! As are you


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 5, 2009
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      Thank you! Angel

      Your always a blessings to me,
      and a treasure


      Love you

      Rend


  • Nevel
    March 3, 2009

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    A very sweet poem! It sprankles and sings..lovely message thoughout your poem. Thank you for entering


  • Sandygram silver member
    February 28, 2009
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    So Lovely

    You have penned a beautiful acrostic for a beautiful young lady. This was a delight to read. She will love it. Take care. Blessings, Sandy

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 1, 2009
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      thank you Ms Sandy

      your comments mean so much to me,
      Bless you My sis

      Rend


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 27, 2009

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    SO VERY DEAR

    This is so lovely! She is a special lady who has always gave what ever she could since I have known her.

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      February 27, 2009
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      Thank you PuppyDog,

      yes she is a dear love of mine, I just adore her

      Blessings to you

      Rend


  • DolceVito gold member
    February 27, 2009
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    Beautiful birthday tribute, Rend...I'm not crazy about acrostics, but love this one.

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      February 27, 2009
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      Vito welcome !

      your comments are a treasure, thank you for coming by

      Blessings

      Rend


  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 26, 2009

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    Your specialty, writing poems of honor an love for the ones you love....Such a endearing acrostic of affection to one I do not know yet, but hope to in the days to come! M.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      February 27, 2009
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      Thank you Mom

      and when that day happens your life will be blessed more for it! she is a treasure. thank you so much for coming by and commenting

      Love you Mom

      Rend


  • crimsondew
    February 26, 2009
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    This is beautiful!!!


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      February 26, 2009

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      Thank you for saying that!

      Our Angel is precious and i love her so!
      and for coming by and commenting!

      Blessings

      Rend

      • crimsondew
        February 26, 2009
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        Very welcome..how could I not stop by when someone is wishing my little sister!


  • AnaelCathetelEcanus silver member
    February 26, 2009
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    I think it's perfect. A beautiful tribute to your sister. So elegant and full of love.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      February 26, 2009
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      Hey New Bestie

      Thank you for stopping by and leaving me a comment, Angel is a precious child of God and shows attributes of that Love

      Blessings

      Rend


  • alivefromlove
    February 26, 2009
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    awww. this is a lovely birthday poem =D good luck in the contests!


  • thepoetssoul
    February 25, 2009

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    This is a wonderful birthday poem.
    Filled with love from a wonderful friend.
    Thanks for sharing, best to you in all you do.

    Tony


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      February 25, 2009
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      Tony hello .....

      Thank you for stoping and commenting, your words of encouragement are so precious to me.

      Blessings

      Rend


  • Midnite-Rae
    February 25, 2009

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    This was sweet. and "says." should be say. But you did a great job. I'm sure Rhianna will love it. Keep up the great work.


  • Away From the Sun
    February 25, 2009

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    Lovely, as always, sis.

    Anyone you love - and has earned your respect - has to be very special.



    Love you,

    Debbie


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      February 25, 2009
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      Sis my other good half and the

      best part of me. you are a sweetie sis and i am blessed
      you came by and commented!

      Love you

      Rend

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