His lips are sterilized lies,
& I can't help but crave the taste of his deciet.
His barbed-wire body clasps me this mascarade,
but our game of hide and seek has never been more enticing.
The poisen of his words intoxicates my veins,
as the secrecy of our affair pounds in his chest.
& She never has to know.
Author notes
http://allpoetry.com/Silent%20Emotions
I know its kinda sucky, my muse ran away while writing it. =/ I hope it works though =)
by the way the "she" is the third party as in the guys real girlfriend.
A contest entry
- All that's left are these pretty words. by Candy Morphine.
400 points, ended April 14, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nah, i love the way this structured. The ending is, as always, just perfect.
FINALIST.
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Hey; Just writing to tell you that the competition has just closed, and was hoping to read your entry as soon as possible.
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Yay!! --Cant wait to read your entry!
Lyrics:
"it's ah-ah-obvious to me right here is where the party starts, with you and me all alone, noone has to know"
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"Lets make a mess, steal a kiss in the moment."
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i just realized which artist these lyrics come from, im so glad you gave me hey monday lyrics. i really like that band.
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Oh my gosh;; i saw them live a week ago in Aus!! Aah im so happy that you recognized them!!!!!!!!!!!=]=]
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Im actually supposed to go see them, along with fall out boy in april. im uber excited!
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