After everything I've already give you,
you still ask for more.
But I have nothing left to give,
nothing but my blood and tears.
So I slash open my skin
to reveal my flesh.
The blood pours from my open wound,
mixing with the tears falling from my face.
You stand there watching me destroy myself
with a blank look on your face.
You don't seem to care about me,
you do nothing to prevent my tragic ending.
Is it fate for me to die like this?
Who am I to stand in the way of fate?
So I make antoher cut,
deeper this time.
I feel my mind going numb,
everything is fogging over.
Goodbye my love,
I'm sorry I couldn't be what you wanted
were the last words uttered from her lips.
A contest entry
- nocturne. by Immortal Obscurity.
1750 points, ended March 25, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very well done
this hit me hard, a lot of emotion, i like it -
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thank you
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Wonderful write!
Best wishes in the contest...and always!
Write on!
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This is very well written, and a very touching write. The flow is perfect and the write is fabulous. I hope you do well in the contest. =D
~~Kitten
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This is so touching, i loved it!
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