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En-fused

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In the land i lived before,
One of slow and lonely walks
And the smallest of small talks,
A place of TV and closed tight curtains.

Gently blossoming into meadows,
Rolling across my living room

A completeness softly strewn,
With purple rainbows and inner smiles.

Walks en-fused with a light step,
Talks a glowing on their own
Into a happiness unknown,
Two minds that caress together.

The starlight's glistening butterfly,
Reveal eyes that need to touch
A future I long to clutch,
On a pier on a mirrored sea.

25/02/09

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  • I really liked the way you wrote this. For some reason, it really grabs me. Thank you for your entry, you did an amazing job!