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I feel like dying.

When the drugs are done, I feel like dying.
I extend my arm, take the needle, and pump the heroin
through my flesh. Another needle, another problem gone.

I roll a blunt, and take a hit, and every hit makes every
girl I ever fucked disappear.

With this bag, a inhale noz, with every inhalation, a little
bit of my personality dies, from inside me.

With every line I do, I feel another life, take over mine.
Another person who has control of my life. I feel like dying, I feel like dying when I'm finished with my drugs. Their my addiction, they're my life.

Yeah...Don't ask.

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  • So I guess I'm the only one who says "Whoo hoo, do whatever the hell you want?" All I know is I love how it feels sometimes. But ANYWAYS!
    I loved the second couplet thing. It was pretty epic.

  • 1. If you're on drugs, ill beat you the fuck up.
    2. Otherwise, good write.

    miss you. Be safe nukkah. >.>
    jade


  • BleedingScars
    February 25

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    dude this isn't kool if u need to talk to someone im here and im a good listener but this is horrible man i mean i've had my addictions to like cigarettes but thats it but if u needa talk im here i promise


  • TacoSexyFail
    February 25

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    {Growls}
    We need talk.

    Aside from my personal opinion on the material within the poem, I liked it.
    The way it was set up and such, the feel of it, etc. it was good.


  • Little Miss Mental
    February 25

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    X.X uhm...don't you dare. You will never truly understand how much you mean to me, you occupy every moment of my mind's thought, losing you.....for whatever reason....I couldn't, no, WOULDN'T continue on.

    I love you Jr. So very much. Please keep the faith <3 Rhi

    btw...this was very good, when you get beyond the morbid meaning


  • sophia moonfairy
    February 25
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    please don't drugs they can kill you they're very dangerous and heroin is very dangerous please don't do this anymore I don't want to lose another person. Please I care about you a lot your a great friend this is a very sad write but yet powerful emotion .. <3 I am always here for you if anything drugs is not the answer

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