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Poetic Judgement

A simple dream, my one ideal,
Enabled with just this one pen,
Set about to achieve my goals,
A perfect student; nobody would
ever know.
A reign of terror,
A reign of judgement,
My divine justice brought about
with a heart stopping speed.
This rotten world,
Those lost souls,
The forgotten morals,
Twisted virtue...
Each name is another sacrifice for
a greater purpose, one
step closer to the
perfect world.
Everybody dreams of a
'paradise',
Everyone wishes for an
'end'.
Those names I write
had their shot,
they ruined their only
chance, and threw away
their gift of life.
The names will face the
justice, they will pay
the price.
My ideals will be realized
despite who gets in my way.
I will create a new world.
I will be God.
I am
KIRA.

Author notes

Death Note

Duck! I know you! I talk to you daily in the cb I won't tell you who I am though. Muwahaha.

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  • this works so well... You protray light so well it's amazing!

  • Azaell
    March 10

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    Death Note is great one of my favorite anime/manga. I think you captured Kira very well. Like his dizzy conscious on the whole matter.
    Fabulous!


  • moonlitanime
    March 9
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    I love death note and I think that you have added a nice touch


  • Heroesrox
    March 4

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    I love Death Note. I loved the ending where Light Yagami dies...because he's a tool. Misa was always my fave....well, her and Ryozaki (spelling?) but he's dead....Awesome job and I am sorry for rambling! Death Note rocks!


  • duckonahockeypuck
    February 25

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    I really loved this poem, nice theme and well writen. YAY.

    Thanks for entering!

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