Sat i did,
just sniffing the flowers,
eat one here and there.....
When i was attacked
A suicidal rat on me!
his little brown and black body atop me,
" I just want to play" that's all the lilttle beast has to say!
A contest entry
- Gone To The Dogs by JeannieD Hunter.
600 points, ended March 4, 2009, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
:D I love this prompt!!
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a fun write that made me smile, i would change the first line to *sitting i was* instead of *sat i did* as i think it reads better but it is up to you of course 
this certainly was a fun prompt to work from and lots of laughter was spreading around AP with it, keep up the good work and thank you for sharing this very funny write with us 
honey bear
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LOL suicidal rat!! He does look like a crazed rat for sure! Great take on the picture. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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