All day I stay locked up in this room
enveloped by the smell of her cotton candy perfume
I am like a flower in a vase or a bird in a cage
Like a moth in the light or like an actor on a stage
captivated, she watches
Blue eyes shift,somethings going on in there
she likes to keep me to herself and no I am not scared
Actually,I love these four walls,because I am not alone
I know shes always there,like words carved in a stone.
crazed, she touches
She loves to feel me there,her fingers dance on my skin
she loves the way my teeth shine,she loves the way I grin
she loves to know I`m all alone waiting for her to come
shes the only one who really knows me or where im coming from
lovingly, she holds me
In her arms I feel so safe,lost in her eyes I drown
and dream of things like the day i will wear that red gown
and she will take me by the hand,everythings finally okay
I just wanted you to know that,forever and always...
Your prisoner I shall stay.
Please tell me what you think
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I like the similies you used and it had really great imagery. The drowning in the eys thing again...NICE!!
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ah yes well when locked in with someone you love then it matters not if you are a prisoner or not for time is good
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A presence
A feeling of someone
Perhaps from another dimension
Perhaps from somewhere inside
Freind or foe
I don't know for sure
But I'm not alone
I love this poem.....chael tip of the hat
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Beautiful! I am finding a common theme of the poetry of yours I have read. I have to say, so far, I love it all! You put such emotion into your work, so loving, completely unconditional. This is no exception. It flowed smoothly, and was just a beautiful, so sweet rolling of the tongue. Great work!
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Beautiful!
This poem really sings to me. Great imagery. I loved it!
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i loved this, the way you use your words was great, and the flow is great! i almost felt like i was hearing a tune in my head as it went along! great job!
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i really enjoyed this, lots of great metaphors in here. outstanding
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wow what a great read and yes he does love me a lot adn from what i can see you this person to in your poem
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thats beautiful,Megan
I LOVE IT!!!
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Adorable
You express yourself so well, and I can definitely feel the love that you have for this person, and I can sense the way you feel surrounded by it. That's a strong and passionate love, and it's the kind that even if you were to want out of it I don't think finding an exit would be easy because it's everywhere. Being a prisoner to love I believe is the best form of incarceration.
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