Its hard to see
You must close your eyes
Cause once you see it
It never dies
Its always there
In your minds eye
Love,once you feel it
It will seldom die
Love for a spouse
Will seldom be
As strong,
As the love of a child will be
Love of a spouse can melt
As does the snow
But once you've seen it
You will always know
But love for a child
Will always be near
And as the snow
Gets deeper each year
A contest entry
- where does the white go when the snow melts? by Nicolette.
1500 points, ended March 6, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prompt is LOVE by lovingpoet.
750 points, ended March 12, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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this was amazing =)
Great write
Loved how you made it rhyme
I just wrote a new song..
It's called change
Honestly I thought it was bad
But let me know what you think
-♥Amanda♥ -
I like this poem it is good
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I tend to agree with you. There is just something about love for a child that is so very strong, so very eternal and you've done well to express that sentiment (that truth) here in this poem.
You also did well to combine snow and love here - well done. A very sweet poem - thank you for this entry.
~ Nicolette
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Excellent:
Again good job.
I love nature, and you
write very well.
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