its quiet...dark
no! stop talking to me!
people might wonder!
Did you see that?
that looked like a demon...where?
right where you are now!
no time! Have to run alice over!
ahh..there it is
the rabbit hole
whats that..?
I said dont talk to me!
no one can see you you know...
Do you feel that?
feels like spiders..
tons of them..
huh?
quit talking to me!!!!
Dont say that storme!
im not crazy!
I dont wanna kill myself..
well if you insist
BOOM!
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Hmm, this sounds quite calm, compared to the conversations I have with myself...
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lol I didnt wanna be too dramatic
I wanted this poem to be simple yet explosive at the end..I admit I didn't do a great job but hey wat can you do
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this is madness lol...i like lol
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Well storm, thanks for the info there, I may be inclined to use my name in prose as well, some time, and a first for me that would be, keep on there. Tony -take care.
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wow....a whirl wind of insanity!!lol..it's a great write girly
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reminds me of me so much
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Insane Insane ride the choo choo train!
whoah! uhhh
Alice in Wonderland.
Spiderman
you!
That has a lot a lot say storme! I've talked to you before, by the way. I just remembered who you were. Everytime I ever needed someone to talk too, we talked in cb. I could be wrong and you could say I'm making it up, ehh maybe I am...but....I know little bit more now, then I did then and
"BOOM"
Doesn't need to be happening!
And you are going insane in this poem. For me that means I need sleep, for you...I don't have a clue :/
Great Poem though and for that *clap*
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true insanity
exactly how it seems
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wow this is really insanity. i love the craziness of it though. quite manic. great reless of energy im sure.
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....this is some seriously crazy stuff...what you been smoking o.O ....lol anyways i really liked it good poem
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wow many time i feel like that myself but this is very good
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