You beckon to me follow,
encouraging me to keep going.
I start to climb,
slip,
and fall...
Reaching for your hands,
But avast I'm left laying there alone,
as you fade into the cool night breeze.
Author notes
This is a view of the up hill battle that each and everyone faces each and every day. The force of pain the pulls us up, but lets us down befor we get to the top of our game.
What did you think
Comments
-
I got a lot out of this short write. it was powerful and thought provoking.
-
Bravo!
Very deep, well thought of, and thought-provoking.
I loved it.
I love the analogies.
And I love your way of expressing this.
Well done.
-
This is amazing and so short but the symbolism in this is amazing I love how you made it so sad... Good job sis
your lil sis
Ciara Ann
Adding your comment:
