I wanted to write tonight
beyond the widow's mite
with clout till midnight
i thought i'd write tonight
of patriot pacts
and solo acts
I am trying to speak with might
before daylight
of love and fights
I am tired of Jack the knife,
of jerks from Fife
with chiefs and SIFE
I have already thought tonight,
of kings,
of blings,
wizards and wings
these things as biege
that lays my night a-siege ...
So many this night i thought of
So much this night i want of
So little this night I've done of.
ask yourself then, tell me
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Haven't w all been in that, "woulda, shoulda, coulda" mode?
You put those thoughts down so well. I love how you always use, "ask yourself then, tell me". That's quite unique. -
Love what you did here this is kind of different. You did a great job hon
I am tired of Jack the knife,
of jerks from Fife
with chiefs and SIFE
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Very nice!
This is a little bit diffrerent that most other peoms I read and it was quite refreshing! I loved the use of words, they relly got my imagination going. I especialy liked the 5th Stanza
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great write and thoughts of what we might do.
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A one for all the "Should've done that before now...." characters (like me). Promises, promises. Nice one.
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A nice write here.....
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