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    ...for Eric

Come whisper to my ear
the freedom he will never
be ready to give you

Now tell me the truth
that laid her weak from
the day she saw its shadow

Here in my arms and to
this open pendant free
the colors in your closet   


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Written May 19 12:38 p.m. 2008

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  • Virgoan
    September 12
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    Just re-reading this piece. Btw, sinong eric ito. Kilala ko ba ito? Taga AP ba siya? lol.

    Hope you are doing great.


    Hensley


  • Phineas Red
    July 1
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  • Virgoan
    March 15

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    Ang galing mo kaibigan.

    There is an inner rhythm that flows in this piece, something open and familiar, a tone set similar to love.


  • second-born
    March 12

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    wow...so much depth and it could take a lot of different meanings in it...but what I'm sure the readers will notice is the sincerity of the writer...I love this!!! kat


  • rbruce gold member
    February 25
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    Your muse is back. A trruly beautiful piece of poetry, very beautiful.


    • mornings
      February 26
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      Well this is an old write, though, the one I posted before it is new. Wanna make a guess what this is about?


  • ams1020
    February 25
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    beautiful

    i loved this one, joy. beautiful in every way.

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