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Beauty

Beauty is just a shell,
it wrinkles and drys with age.
But inner beauty never dies,
so let it out of it's cage.

No matter how rich,
the bars of gold might be.
It's what's inside that counts,
a hidden bird to let free.

So let it fly away,
and leave rainbows in its wake.
Let it shimmer incandescent,
be beautiful for goodness sake!

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Nutshell

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  • :) :) :)

    Definately
    This is a beautifull poem nice write!
    GREAT job!
    -Draggie

  • ea silver member
    March 5

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    A nice message of beauty and wisdom is contained here in your nut - well rhymed and everything. Thank you for your entry!

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    February 25

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    This is a message in a nutshell indeed. I like this.
    Well spoken and expressed. Thanks for sharing.
    Brian