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together as one
a union whole
freely, fully, forever given
promise of a child
unfulfilled
just how much ache
can one heart take

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02-22-09

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  • DreamMountain
    October 16
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    i agree with "SomeonesToySoldier". it is heartbreaking


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    February 25
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    Aww Meghan this is heartbreaking.

    "promise of a child
    Unfulfilled"

    That is very power and a feeling that unfortunaly I know all to well. For the 3rd time that hope has been sprung in my soul only to be crush again although not so traumatically as it has in the past. Its a great poem very very good.