so clear are your eyes
crystal depth
I'm lost in them
as though at sea
pierced by them
as though by a diamond spear
light within
shining pure white
so icy
and yet so warm
inviting
enticing
loving
mysterious
feelings and thoughts swirled
on the surface
like semi-precious stones
glittering and sparkling
those beautiful eyes entrance
so clear
so completely crystal clear
Author notes
12-29-08
your eyes have always fascinated me, love
Please tell me your honest opinion
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thanks meg, now i feel BLUE.
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This is an awesome poem. It flows very well and is fun to read. Thank you for sharing.
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I feel ashamed that a poem as good as this was written for me. You did a great job with this poem. The depth of emotion and the descriptiveness is great. good job.
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Beautiful description of blue eyes...my grandson has blue eyes, so I better watch out for him! Nice flow and softening tones to the words. Blessings.
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great
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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